Writing Workshop – Concrit Please!

jacksgreysays:

jacksgreysays:

I just finished a draft of my script for the writing workshop and I would love it if everyone could take a look at it and comment with some constructive criticism!

The link is here–it’s a Google Doc which I’ve set so that people who have the link can comment.

My odds of getting my script produced increased because some people dropped out, so now I have a 3/14 chance!

Wish me luck! Or, better yet, point out the obviously awkward parts of my script! I’d appreciate it greatly! 😀

Updated draft, still the same link! Would appreciate any feedback 😀

Okay final call for concrit (for this script in particular)! Just had my table read today and mostly just restructured scenes, but I did add in some new lines so I’d appreciate some extra eyes there.

Next week is when the producers and directors get to look over the scripts and decide, once and for all, whose play will be produced. 

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!! O_O

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